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Panel 1: POV over Mikey’s Shoulder
Mikey pumps round after round into the oncoming zino horde.
Mikey
Whatever – just go!
Panel 2: Claire’s jumped up on the higher part of the shipping/receiving dock and is firing as well.
Claire
C’mon, I’ll cover you.
Panel 3: Mikey turns and runs as Claire gets a head shot on of the zinos (close panel)
Mikey
Hope these supplies were worth it
Panel 4: Mikey’s gotten to the docks and is jumping up as Claire is pounding on the rolled metal door
Claire
Open up, now!
Panel 5: Int. Docs. We see the inside of the docs where Suicide (spitter: see character design sheet)armed with a hockey stick and Paul (Dryosaurus again see character sheet) armed with an Uzi. The docs are two staged, with the second, higher, riser being accessible only by stairs, as it’s caged in. Paul is standing next to the switch which activates the door on the elevated stage and Suicide is standing by the door.
Suicide
What’s the secret password
Panel 6: Cut back to the pair outside shooting frantically
Mikey
(yelling) Now Damn it!
Panel 7: CT interior dock. Motioning for Paul to flip the switch.
Suicide
That’s the one.
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Panel 1 Ext. Docks. Hordes getting closer.
Claire
Anytime ladies!
Panel 2 Int. Docks. Suicide is spinning around, as the gate hasn’t opened yet. Paul is hesitating at the switch, which looks like the large levers they use on movie electric chairs.
Suicide
C’mon Pointdexter, move it!
Paul
But if I open the door we’ll get swarmed
Panel 3: Suicide bounding up the steps.
Suicide
Damn it you coward, MOVE!
Panel 4: Small Panel: See switch being flipped.
Panel 5: Ext. Docks. We can see the metal gate slowly lifting, as Mikey & Claire are on the docking bay trying to slow the onrushing zinos.
Mikey
Finally, Claire go!
Panel 6: Suicide’s running back down as we see Claire trying to slide through the opening. Suicide is yelling at Paul over his shoulder.
Suicide
Covering fire!
Paul
But I’m down to 10 rounds!
Panel 7: Suicide grabs Claire and is trying to help pull her through.
P7(con’t)
Suicide
So much for in and out huh?
Panel 8: Ext. Dock: Mikey is in a solid fight as some of the zinos have reached the dock and are on it.
Mikey
C’mon. C’MON!
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Panel 1: Mikey manages to duck under the opening gate, but so do some of the smaller Zinos (compys and the like) Paul is blasting away without aiming, out of fear, using up the last of his ammo.
Mikey
I’m in, close it!
Panel 2: More of the zinos are managing to get in trough the opening, as Suicide
Is slap shooting a group of Compies back outside
Suicide
. . .he scores!
Mikey
Paul close the door!
Panel 3: Pauls got his full body on the lever
Paul
What does it look like I’m trying to do? It’s stuck
Panel 4: Claire runs up the steps to help.
Panel 5: Clair and Paul stain and manage to get the switch down.
Claire
Got it
Panel 6: Long panel: of Mikey and Suicide at the bottow level trying to fend of the zinos that got in.
Mikey
Little busy.
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